Where are my TEARJERKERS?

I'm visualizing something made of win. It's going to be a double-sided, trifold brochure. On several of the columns, we have personal testimonies from the ESK girls (grab their stories off the site), Tory, or any of the dozens of stories scattered around Enturb, ExScn, etc. We put "SCIENTOLOGY BREAKS FAMILIES" in big letters on the front, and the back panel is websites where you can go to learn more (ESK, obviously, goes on there).

I've been fiddling with something like this in MSWord (yes, laugh at me, I suck, it's all I've got), but I'd love to see what the Enturb community comes up with.

Here's one that kind of pays tribute to Chaotic Psychotic, while trying to cover lots of ground. I made it in her honor, so to speak.

http://www.mediafire.com/?xitmbwz3hj4

Originally Posted by tiggernew

Here's one that kind of pays tribute to Chaotic Psychotic, while trying to cover lots of ground. I made it in her honor, so to speak.

http://www.mediafire.com/?xitmbwz3hj4

Yours is great, no question, but I'd like to see one using real stories and people. Any chance you could replace Bob/Mary/Lauren with:

"I love my father. I also love my aunt, uncles, cousins, my brother and his family, and my little nephews and neices, all of whom are Scientologists. That's my entire immediate family. All of whom I may never be able to speak to again." - Kendra Wiseman, daughter of CCHR President Bruce Wiseman.

"My parents officially left the church when I was 16 in 2000. Not only was I not allowed to speak to them, I was not allowed to answer a phone for well over a year, in case it was them calling me." - Jenna Miscavige Hill, niece of Church of Scientology leader David Miscavige.

"When I was about 8 months pregnant, my ex-husband wrote me a letter and told me that he had decided that he did not want to have anything to do with our daughter when she was born." - Astra Woodcraft.

I think so! It's a matter of time... and respacing things.

Lemme see what I can cook up.

http://www.mediafire.com/?l63nmgcjkgt

any good?

Zer0 - I can't open your file. Did you make it using Mac OSX? 'Cause that's the folder it created and dumped it in.

front: http://www.mediafire.com/?3mntyosxcax
inside: http://www.mediafire.com/?b23jn3mvhdi

still getting used to using a mac.

Zer0, if I ever meet you, I will carry your manbabies. That's a great brochure. I'm wondering, though, if you couldn't hack Moira Hutchinson's quotes down to the last paragraph? That's the one that really carries the impact, whereas all the text and acronyms in preceding paragraphs dilute the emotional appeal. You could then add some of the ESK quotes I put up, or others of your choosing, to fill up the space.

Originally Posted by A_nonchalant

Zer0, if I ever meet you, I will carry your manbabies. That's a great brochure. I'm wondering, though, if you couldn't hack Moira Hutchinson's quotes down to the last paragraph? That's the one that really carries the impact, whereas all the text and acronyms in preceding paragraphs dilute the emotional appeal. You could then add some of the ESK quotes I put up, or others of your choosing, to fill up the space.

Heh thanks. It helps when you've been designing stuff like this for the last 3 years...

As for the update, I will certainly do that. I have been looking at that part for the longest time, and actually didn't like the full part up there to begin with...

I also noticed i dont have folding crop lines...those will be in the new update.

Thanks on the compliment again.

brochure version 2

insidde: http://www.mediafire.com/?yuwag9nhmgy
outside: http://www.mediafire.com/?xu2qjndvgng

Excellent stuff! I notice on the outside-left you have a bit of stuff advertising April 12th - can you do a version to hand out *on* April 12th? It should basically just involve cutting out a few specific lines - Enturbulation should stay; I'm wondering if you could also throw in an ESK link, maybe something like, "Disturbed about the stories inside? Read more about Kendra, Jenna, and Astra at www.exscientologykids.com. Want to help them? Learn more about Anonymous at www.enturbulation.org."

I've stuck the current draft on my USB of WIN; will be printing those out for April 12th anyway if you don't feel up to making a revision.

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