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Old 04-02-2008, 08:22 PM   #8 (link to here)
A_nonchalant
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Re: Where are my TEARJERKERS?

Zer0, if I ever meet you, I will carry your manbabies. That's a great brochure. I'm wondering, though, if you couldn't hack Moira Hutchinson's quotes down to the last paragraph? That's the one that really carries the impact, whereas all the text and acronyms in preceding paragraphs dilute the emotional appeal. You could then add some of the ESK quotes I put up, or others of your choosing, to fill up the space.
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