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Old 05-13-2008, 01:50 PM   #21 (link to here)
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This might sound silly but what about potentially adding the fact that we have found out that some businesses have been pressured to put up "No Anonymous" signs- as per Starbucks blog?
It's relevant, but the story has to flow. Imagine the person reading it only knows that Anonymous has been holding protests world-wide. We're letting them know that in one city, Scientology has tried to prevent the legal protests. We have to find a place to fit that in.

We also need it sharp and concise. I know there's an urge to include every bit of relevant info, but if we do that, it becomes too much for any journalist to research or print. We want as few facts as possible, all supported by outside sources, and we want those facts to tell a story that's interesting and news-worthy.
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Old 05-13-2008, 01:52 PM   #22 (link to here)
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Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

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This might sound silly but what about potentially adding the fact that we have found out that some businesses have been pressured to put up "No Anonymous" signs- as per Starbucks blog?
You'd need clear evidence of that. A starbucks statement would go a long way. My guess is they probably want nothing to do with this but worth a shot if some one has their number.
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Old 05-13-2008, 02:03 PM   #23 (link to here)
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fax number is the city hall office of a scientologist...

Fax is from "95624052". You can turn this into a phone number by removing the "9" which is commonly used as an inside-to-outside line extension. This leaves us with the phone number 562-4052. The area code for Clearwater FL is 727.

727-562-4052 Result:

Pinellas Suncoast Transit Authority
Paul Gibson
Councilmember
Clearwater City Hall
Telephone: (727) 562-4050
Fax: (727) 562-4052


STOP-WISE.BIZ : World Institute of Scientology Enterprises 1999 directory
Food Cart Systems, Inc.
Paul F. Gibson
533 Cleveland St.
Clearwater, FL 33755-4007

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Old 05-13-2008, 02:15 PM   #24 (link to here)
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Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

My quote, if it's worthy:

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As one of the people who has been protesting against Scientology's abuses for the last four months, I find it extremely distressing that they are (again) trying to use the government of the City of Clearwater to suppress free speech. After failing twice to get a court to approve an injunction, it now appears that they're using a Scientologist City Councilman and a "scientologist-only" petition as a back-door method to squelch civil liberties in Clearwater. I implore the Mayor, City Council and the press to closely examine the motives of the signatories of this petition, as well as the Councilman who faxed it.
(replace "Councilman" with his name... whatever that was)
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Old 05-13-2008, 02:18 PM   #25 (link to here)
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Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

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FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE
CLEARWATER, FLORIDA. March 12, 2008 - The Church of Scientology in Clearwater Florida is once again attempting to impede the rights of US citizens to free assembly and free speech.

On May 9th 2008 a petition[1] was filed with Mayor Frank Hillbard of Clearwater Florida. In that petition, 37 merchants of the Cleveland Street district assert that frequent anti-Scientology demonstrations are disruptive to commerce in downtown Clearwater, making it difficult to attract new customers to the downtown district.

[Anonymous, a loosely-affiliated group of individuals, has held global protests every month since February, with plans to continue to hold protests until the Church ceases all illegal and immoral activities.]=this paragraph needs reworked. help?

The fax number on the petition belongs to City Councilman Paul Gibson, who has long and extensive ties to the Church of Scientology.

It has been confirmed that 29 of the 37 signatories also have long standing ties with the Church. Of the remaining 8 signatories, 8 are illegible and two are for duplicate business[2]. Many of these businesses are not open during weekends, when the protests are held. Business with ties to Scientology that were open during the protests had 'Anonymous Not Welcome' signs featured predominantly in their shop fronts.

This petition is the next in a series of attempts to thwart the legal rights of those opposed to the Church of Scientology. On March 10th, a petition for a restraining order was filed in court seeking to stop an upcoming picket.[3] The petition was filed twice, and twice denied. A pattern of similar efforts to silence dissent can be found throughout Scientology's past.

[quote from an Anon goes here]

For more information, please visit Enturbulation.org. Updates on this and other stories pertaining to the Church of Scientology can be found at the Enturbulation Press Page[4].

[1]http://www.clearclearwater.com/images/1/1c/Pdfa6054.pdf

[2]Research supporting these claims can be found at []Press Release: Clearwater business petition - Enturbulation.org Activism Forums and
[]Press Release: Clearwater business petition - Enturbulation.org Activism Forums.

[3]http://www.sptimes.com/2008/03/12/im...injunction.pdf

[4]http://www.enturbulation.org/press-media

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Old 05-13-2008, 02:24 PM   #26 (link to here)
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Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

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It has been confirmed that 28 of the 37 signatories also have long standing ties with the Church.
Confirmation is now up to 30. Gro Miller (#30) was identified, as well as biz on #1 List on page 1 updated.
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Old 05-13-2008, 02:28 PM   #27 (link to here)
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Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

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Confirmation is now up to 30. Gro Miller (#30) was identified, as well as biz on #1 List on page 1 updated.
Updated.

Nonetheless, the math on that sentence doesn't work. 'Of the 8 remaining, 8 are illegible and 2 are duplicates.' Can we clarify that?

edit: also, if that research can be posted on a static website that we can link to, it would be helpful. Right now I have tinyurls pointing to your posts on this forum. Any journalist that wants to do digging can work with that, but if they just want to glance at it, the forum won't satisfy them.
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Old 05-13-2008, 02:35 PM   #28 (link to here)
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Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

If there's still two that are duplicates, then it means someone must have been able to decipher more of the signatures that were previously illegible.
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Old 05-13-2008, 02:36 PM   #29 (link to here)
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Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

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Nonetheless, the math on that sentence doesn't work. 'Of the 8 remaining, 8 are illegible and 2 are duplicates.' Can we clarify that?
Working on tidying up the numbers. Back shortly.
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Old 05-13-2008, 02:50 PM   #30 (link to here)
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Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

Okay... rather than doing any math, I'll just post the raw findings so y'all can present them however seems most appropriate.

Total signatories: 37

Illegible signatory names: 6

3 Illegible Rose's Jewelry
11 Illegible Helen's Tayloring
17 Illegible Illegible
19 Illegible Stonebridge Real Estate
20 Illegible Illegible
21 Illegible Groupware International

Illegible business names: 3

17 Illegible Illegible 519 Cleveland St, 33755
20 Illegible Illegible No address
13 Susan D. Player Illegible Impossible to look up

Repeat signatories for same business: 6

25 Gen Cournoyer Botanica Day Spa 123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
24 Joanna Hanos Botanica Day Spa 123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755

31 Brian Andrus Stonebridge Real Estate 1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756
19 Illegible Stonebridge Real Estate 1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756

14 Paris Morfopoulos One Stoppe Shoppe 411 Cleveland St, 32755
4 Beatrice A. One Stoppe Shoppe 411 Cleveland St, 33755

Businesses that can't be found: 7

36 Julie Tucker Clearwater Classics No business by that name found
15 Ingrid Collewijn Health Motion PT serv No business by that name found
6 Jeff P. Hendrick Jeffpaulco No business by that name found
29 Rose (illegible) LaRose Soup & Salad No business by that name found
8 Jim Valco NuLean Nutritional Supplements No business by that name found
3 Illegible Rose's Jewelry No business by that name found
1 Margaret Seabloom Skin Perfection Studio No business by that name found

Non-business signatories: 1

32 Linda (illegible) Resident None
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Old 05-13-2008, 02:55 PM   #31 (link to here)
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This petition is the next in a series of attempts to thwart the legal rights of those opposed to the Church of Scientology. On March 10th, a petition for a restraining order was filed in court seeking to stop an upcoming picket.[3] The petition was filed twice, and twice denied. A pattern of similar efforts to silence dissent can be found throughout Scientology's past.
tweaked version (with legal mumbo jumbo):
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This petition is the latest in a series of attempts to thwart the legal rights of those opposed to the Church of Scientology. On March 10th, 2008, the Church of Scientology sought to enjoin future protests via judicial authority. A "Petition for Injunction for Protection Against Repeat Violence" was filed with Florida's Sixth Circuit District Court seeking the extraordinary remedy of injunctive restraint pending further proceedings. The Honorable W. Douglas Baird (Circuit Judge) struck down this original complaint and acted similarly upon re-filing (adding prejudice to the latter).

A pattern of similar efforts to silence dissent can be found throughout Scientology's past.

edit- it's very important to point out that the second filing was denied with prejudice
[if anyone is confused, the word "prejudice" has a different meaning in court language. It's a judge's way of saying, "i'm tired of dealing with you, so get the f*ck out and take your b.s. filings with you".]

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Old 05-13-2008, 02:56 PM   #32 (link to here)
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Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

Put another way, each of the entries in the list above has one or more reasons it isn't valid. If I normalize the list, this means that these entries:

1
3
6
8
11
13
14
15
17
19
20
21
25
29
31
32
36

have issues.

If we remove the invalid ones from the list, that only leaves:

2 Cary Goulston Salon Bravo 409 Cleveland St, 33755
4 Beatrice A. One Stoppe Shoppe 411 Cleveland St, 33755
5 Valorie Shillington The Rabbit Hole Cafe 425 Cleveland St, 33755
7 Louise Stephens High Point Realty 413 Cleveland Street, 33755
9 Liz Adams Clearwater Realty 519 Cleveland St # 100, 33755
10 Diana Rejell Peter Gillham's Vitamins 411 Cleveland St, 33755
12 Janice Batey The People Link Inc 423 Cleveland St, 33755
14 Paris Morfopoulos One Stoppe Shoppe 411 Cleveland St, 32755
16 Caroline Veach World Financial Group 639 Cleveland St #200, 33755
18 Paul Hernandez Cleavland St. Café 615 Cleveland St, 32755
22 Angela Gioffre G&P Fashion Service 409 Cleveland St, 33755
23 Jasmine Salan La Bella Hair Studio 123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
24 Joanna Hanos Botanica Day Spa 123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
25 Gen Cournoyer Botanica Day Spa 123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
26 Ugo Moi Cafe Milano 105 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
27 Michelle Lea Robertson Bellissima Salon & Spa 101 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
28 Robin Hoss(sp) Pangea Café 34 North Fort Harrison Ave, 33755
30 Gro Miller Florida Gulf Coast Homes 631 Cleveland St, 32755
31 Brian Andrus Stonebridge Real Estate 1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756
33 Brian Kirby Annie Rose Deli 647 Cleveland St, 32755
34 Louis J. Chacones Angie's Restaurant 725 Cleveland St, 32755
35 Charlene Townsend Cosmos Realty 6 S Myrtle Ave, 33756
37 Wallace Woodbury Aesthetic Mind Studios 411 Cleveland Street #105, 33755

All, except 3... #'s 33, 34, 35 (21 out of 24) in the remaining list are Scientologists or
Scientologist owned.


tl;dr out of the 37 sigs, only 24 hold water. Out of those 24, 21 have been identified as having ties to scientology. 85% of valid entries have scientology ties.
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Old 05-13-2008, 03:03 PM   #33 (link to here)
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Re: Press Release: Clearwater business petition

Even better, here's the same data so you can pull it into a spreadsheet and play with it all you want (tab delimited):

Code:
sig no	valid	name	business name	address	links and notes
1	n	Margaret  Seabloom	Skin Perfection Studio	No business by that name found	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/m/margaret-seabloom.html
2		Cary Goulston	Salon Bravo	"409 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://scientologist.myhomepage.org/~carygoulston/
3	n	Illegible	Rose's Jewelry	No business by that name found	Invalid
4		Beatrice A.	One Stoppe Shoppe	"411 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.onestoppeshoppe.com/aboutus.htm http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/p/paris-morfopoulos.html
5		Valorie Shillington	The Rabbit Hole Cafe	"425 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/v/valorie-shillington.html
6	n	Jeff P. Hendrick	Jeffpaulco	No business by that name found	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/j/jeffrey-p.-hendrick.html
7		Louise Stephens	High Point Realty	"413 Cleveland Street, 33755"	http://www.highpointrealtycorp.com/ http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/d/david-kerr.html
8	n	Jim Valco	NuLean Nutritional Supplements	No business by that name found	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/j/jim-valco.html
9		Liz Adams	Clearwater Realty	"519 Cleveland St # 100, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/l/liz-adams.html
10		Diana Rejell	Peter Gillham's Vitamins	"411 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/p/peter-f.-gillham.html
11	n	Illegible	Helen's Tayloring	"423 Cleveland St # 102, 32755"	Unconfirmed
12		Janice Batey	The People Link Inc	"423 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/j/janice-batey.html
13	n	Susan D. Player	Illegible	Impossible to look up	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/s/susan-d.-player.html
14	n dupe	Paris Morfopoulos	One Stoppe Shoppe	"411 Cleveland St, 32755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/p/paris-morfopoulos.html
15	n	Ingrid Collewijn	Health Motion PT serv	No business by that name found	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/i/ingrid-collewijn.html
16		Caroline Veach	World Financial Group	"639 Cleveland St #200, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/c/caroline-veach.html
17	n	Illegible	Illegible	"519 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/wise/wise_2001_directory.html
18		Paul Hernandez	Cleavland St. Café	"615 Cleveland St, 32755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/p/paulo-cesar-reyes-hernandez.html
19	n dupe	Illegible	Stonebridge Real Estate	"1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756"	Repeat of #31 (same scientologist owned business)
20	n	Illegible	Illegible	No address	Invalid
21	n	Illegible	Groupware International	"601 Cleveland St, 33764"	Invalid
22		Angela Gioffre	G&P Fashion Service	"409 Cleveland St, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/a/angela-gioffre.html
23		Jasmine Salan	La Bella Hair Studio	"123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/j/jasmine-salan.html
24		Joanna Hanos	Botanica Day Spa	"123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	"Same business as #24, confirmed scientologist"
25	n dupe	Gen Cournoyer	Botanica Day Spa	"123 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/g/gen-cournoyer.html
26		Ugo Moi	Cafe Milano	"105 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/u/ugo-moi.html
27		Michelle Lea Robertson	Bellissima Salon & Spa	"101 N Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/m/michelle-lea-robertson.html
28		Robin Hoss(sp)	Pangea Café	"34 North Fort Harrison Ave, 33755"	Scientologist owned business
29	n	Rose (illegible)	LaRose Soup & Salad	No business by that name found	Invalid
30		Gro Miller	Florida Gulf Coast Homes	"631 Cleveland St, 32755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/g/gro-miller.html
31		Brian Andrus	Stonebridge Real Estate	"1465 S Fort Harrison Ave # 103, 33756"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/t/the-brian-&-donna-andrus-family.html
32	n	Linda (illegible)	Resident	None	Invalid
33		Brian Kirby	Annie Rose Deli	"647 Cleveland St, 32755"	Unconfirmed
34		Louis J. Chacones	Angie's Restaurant	"725 Cleveland St, 32755"	Unconfirmed
35		Charlene Townsend	Cosmos Realty	"6 S Myrtle Ave, 33756"	Unconfirmed
36	n	Julie Tucker	Clearwater Classics	No business by that name found	Unconfirmed
37		Wallace Woodbury	Aesthetic Mind Studios	"411 Cleveland Street #105, 33755"	http://www.truthaboutscientology.com/stats/by-name/w/wallace-woodbury.html
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Old 05-13-2008, 03:12 PM   #34 (link to here)
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Nice work so far on the press release, GJ anons.